three haiku for the .. I forget.

Apr. 13th, 2009 at 9:47 PM

a new day, the same--
started with simple pleasures
cereal in milk

dark, jagged spirits
rhyme and rap the raw and real
month of poetry

exhausta-tiredness
permeates like slow things
ding, dong, ding. and stuff.

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wendigomountain

Apr. 14th, 2009 04:56 am (UTC)

I really liked the first one. The last line says it all some days.

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kaolinfire

Apr. 14th, 2009 04:57 am (UTC)

Thanks :) Yeah, it was a good start to the day. Must focus on that. :)

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mackatlaw

Apr. 14th, 2009 07:03 pm (UTC)

Glad to see you posting! Haven't heard back from you on email; guess we reached the point where too much brainpower was involved in replies.

Email or call me on my birthday next Sunday, would you? I need reassurances from my friends that I'm not forgotten. :)

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kaolinfire

Apr. 14th, 2009 07:59 pm (UTC)

:heh: I remember that email, now that you mention it. Yes, brain-power to effectively say anything other than "meh". :)

I aim to call. :)

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mackatlaw

Apr. 14th, 2009 08:38 pm (UTC)

Cool!

And I'll actually be 34 on *Monday*, but people get credit for calling on either Sunday or Monday. (grin). The party is Sunday.

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