A bit of micro-fiction

Apr. 6th, 2009 at 2:01 AM

A bit of micro-fiction up at orrot.org. Going to be trying to do a few a week just to remind myself I can write prose, even if it's not "the best prose in the world". It's okay to write "fun" and "cliche" from time to time. With a dash of "doesn't hang together", if needed. Fun? :)

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girlspell

Apr. 6th, 2009 10:50 am (UTC)

I liked...a lot. I liked this line "let them ease ahead. They let me ease ahead." Kind of a race that never ends.

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kaolinfire

Apr. 6th, 2009 11:12 am (UTC)

Thanks :D It was fun to put together (I especially enjoyed the gimmick of the strike-throughs). Didn't wind up being what I'd intended, but that's ok ;)

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kaolinfire

Apr. 6th, 2009 01:25 pm (UTC)

:hehe: Thanks. :)

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