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girlspell
Nov. 26th, 2008 05:53 pm (UTC)
That was a terrific poem. I guess, as a women (and a mom) I could really feel this.

I loved that last 2 lines

for the scars of her hand or
the scars of her heart.

Just amazing...
kaolinfire
Nov. 26th, 2008 07:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you :D

I was partial to those lines--some folks feel they're too ... cliche, or maudlin, or something, but the sound and feel of them was very important to me. :)
ken_schneyer
Nov. 26th, 2008 09:50 pm (UTC)
Very nice -- creates a feeling of being in two, possibly three, places at once. Takes the Gaian Hypothesis and turns it into a personal relationship, with all the frailties a relationship has. And you really do have a thing for those sucker-punch last lines, don't you?

Do you like working with Quick Fic? I have a few drabbles I might send.
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