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One Shot

It always started
that way, the same
one shot, just one--

wasn't so bad, so one,
one more to relax,
feel the burn, ...

But he wished
that he would learn:
whatever he did
in the blackness between
was never good.

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(Anonymous)
Jun. 14th, 2011 11:02 pm (UTC)
Nice poem K
BTW whatever happened to Poemranker? Are you planning on bringing it back up? If not is there a way to retrieve your old poems?
kaolinfire
Jun. 14th, 2011 11:06 pm (UTC)
Re: Nice poem K
it's not supposed to be down. Will look into. =/
kaolinfire
Jun. 14th, 2011 11:14 pm (UTC)
Re: Nice poem K
back up. apparently screwed up the dns moving it over to the new server. go fig.
(Anonymous)
Jun. 18th, 2011 10:05 pm (UTC)
Re: Nice poem K
Thanks K,
I'd hate to see PR ever go away. I met my girlfreind there and I have alot of fond memories from my time spent on the site. I should put some new posts up soon once it's back up. Love the hat BTW.

ALChemy
kaolinfire
Jun. 20th, 2011 12:23 am (UTC)
Re: Nice poem K
It should be up now...? Though I just realized that if your session went bad it wouldn't let you back in...on the new server. Ah, "upgrades". Jumped from Tomcat 4 to Tomcat 7 (and Postgresql 7 to Postgresql 9).
Kim Nelson
Jun. 15th, 2011 03:51 am (UTC)
It's the blackness in between that gets most of those :just one shotters."
la_poetessa
Jun. 15th, 2011 01:35 pm (UTC)
clever one-shot. and you are right about that blackness-- it gets you every time.
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