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Today's Haikus (NaPoWriMo, eh?)

waking and mourning
dreams shift to reality
the turning seasons

blood boils, cools again
circulates and permeates
programming is hate

stirring witches, three
threaten with their prophecy
to know is to be

sun travels to sun
life is left with things undone
don't forget the fun

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autumnsea
Apr. 13th, 2009 09:05 am (UTC)
I found something in each of them that I liked. :)

I love the word play with 'mourning' in the first haiku.

There is a rather profound message in the second haiku - nicely done, Kaolin.

My favourite is the third with the three witches.

And,
"sun travels to sun
life is left with things undone ..."

those lines move around my head - I like. Plus, good rhyme going on in the third and fourth haiku. :)
xjenavivex
Apr. 13th, 2009 04:27 pm (UTC)
::jumps up and down::

This is my favorite frame. I loved your witches. These are awesome!
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